Amsal 16:21

16:21 The one who is wise in heart ¹  is called ²  discerning,

and kind speech ³  increases persuasiveness. ⁴ 

Amsal 23:33

23:33 Your eyes will see strange things, ⁵ 

and your mind will speak perverse things.

[16:21]  ¹ tn Heb “wise of heart” (so NRSV).

[16:21]  ² tn Heb “to the wise of heart it will be called discerning.” This means that the wise of heart, those who make wise decisions (“heart” being the metonymy), will gain a reputation of being the discerning ones.

[16:21]  ³ tn Heb “sweetness of lips.” The term “lips” is a metonymy of cause, meaning what is said. It is a genitive of specification. The idea of “sweetness” must be gracious and friendly words. The teaching will be well-received because it is both delightful and persuasive (cf. NIV “pleasant words promote instruction”).

[16:21]  ⁴ tn Heb “teaching” or “receptivity”; KJV “learning”; NIV “instruction.”

[23:33]  ⁵ tn The feminine plural of זָר (zar, “strange things”) refers to the trouble one has in seeing and speaking when drunk.